Sunday, January 31, 2010
Annotated Bibliography for Oral
Backlash; the undeclared War against Women
○ Women and advertising
○ Women got first put into advertising because it was a sense of freedom and rights for all
○ The start of women going to work was the start of putting women into advertisement
○ The women emancipation
○ Women want to be like men and so they will listen more to women then to men
○ If a women sells a product they are more likely to buy it from them then from a man
○ Women have to be prettier then men
○ Women have to live longer and healthier
○ Women are better
Video
Frontline PBS: The Persuaders
○ Everywhere there is advertisement
○ How do we know what to choose
○ The marketing strategies
○ How to find out how to advertise
○ Different experts talking about consumers and what they really want
○ Emotional branding
○ Most things are bought because there is a connection to it
○ The science of selling
○ How do we sell and how do we know what the consumer wants
○ People have to find this out, by testing the individual consumers by asking them questions about products, etc.
○ There has to be a direct target to find out what will be bought and what not
○ Car companies will not produce small cars, because the consumer will think that the car is too small even if it does help the environment - they don’t care, it needs to be practical
Online article
Frontline PBS: Analysis
○ An overview of what is in the different chapters of the movie, and what people are going to talk about it.
○ Not very helpful for the actual oral
○ There is a short sentence at the beginning which can be used as topic sentences
○ There HAS to be an emotional connection between the consumer and the product they buy
Frontline PBS: Forum, so how should we think about all of this…?
○ Interviews from experts in the field of advertising and market research
○ 4 major questions are asked, and each individual answers it
○ There are different opinions
§ Advertising is good, because in the end the consumer has the right to choose
§ Advertising is bad but we cannot do anything about it
○ Some of the questions are not helpful, because they go into great detail.
○ This can be used to quote some experts and how the feel towards advertising
Wednesday, January 20, 2010
Options
Ad (Greenpeace)
Screenplay (Cuckoo)
Pastiche (maybe Hitchhikers?? Depending on the book that SL choose)
Friday, November 27, 2009
Intro and Big Idea
In heaven one will find those who died proudly and those who died in hatred. The poem by Rupert Brooke The Soldier and the poem Reconciliation by Siegfried Sassoon both cope with the situation of dying for one’s own country and the nationalistic feeling towards war. While both poems speak of war in different ways and through the use of different devices, the two lyric poems have some similarities. The biggest difference is the fact that The Soldier was written before the war and is an Italian sonnet and Reconciliation was written after the war and is an epigram. The main idea portrayed in The Soldier speaks of the love towards own country and that it is a positive thing if one dies for their own country. Reconciliation speaks of the horrors of the war, and that it is foolish to think that war is something positive and that fighting is doing a good deed. Therefore, the two poems differ in their perspective but have the same content, since both talk about nationalism and the love or hate to fight for ones country. These main ideas are portrayed and displayed in the pieces through mainly imagery, both sensory and figurative, as well as tone, rhetoric, persona, structure and language. Although one may be more present in one of the poems than in the other, both use imagery as their main device to emphasize their view on going to war and the good and bad things about what happened or what is going to happen.
General Big Idea: The big idea that these two poems both share in common is the juxtaposition about being proud to fight for ones country and the loss that happens during a war.
Thursday, November 26, 2009
Planting a Sequoia
English Yr. 2 Mr. Holmes
Planting a Sequoia
The poem Planting a Sequoia by Dana Gioia was written in 2004, and is a lyric poem. A lyric poem is a poem that expresses personal feeling, mood or mediation towards something. Furthermore, the poem has an elegiac perspective, because the content of this poem is about a father’s first baby son dyeing and a tree being planted to represent this. Dana Gioia uses a lot of imagery, both sensory and figurative, to describe her feelings towards the situation. The big idea of this poem is the juxtaposition between death and birth and it is expressed by a baby boy dyeing and a sequoia tree being planted.
The use of imagery in this poem is very powerful since it sets the mood throughout the poem. Already in the first stanza imagery is used to set the setting. Due to sensory imagery like, “Rain blackened the horizon, but cold winds kept it over the Pacific” one can locate that the poem is set in the north-west Coast of America. Also the atmosphere of the poem is defined by the use of diction and the descriptions about the setting. Words like rain, blackened, dull and grey suggest a sad mood, for example due to death. An example of more figurative imagery is in stanza three: “stray atoms” which is a metaphor for bits and pieces of the dead baby boy. Throughout the poem, more imagery is used, especially in the middle stanza, where the burial of the little baby is described. A metaphor used is “our native giant” which refers to the Sequoia tree, which is native to North America. The new tree being planted is in juxtaposition to the baby being buried under the tree. “Wrapping in your roots a lock of hair, a piece of an infant’s birth cord.” This verse is the heart of the poem, because it is in contrast to the new tree being planted. Gioia uses symbols such as a lock of hair and the birth cord to represent the baby boy that died.
The juxtaposition in this poem is also represented by the tone of the poem. In the second stanza the tone of the poem is hopeful, because it uses the conditional verb “would” to express what would have happened if they lived in Sicily. The father explains that he would have planted an olive tree or a fig tree to celebrate new life; however this wouldn’t have worked in America due to the temperature. Therefore, a Sequoia tree was planted, which is represents a long life even though a baby just died.
This elegiac poem is driven by the use of imagery and reflects on the big idea, which is the juxtaposition between birth and death. The symbols used to represent this are the Sequoia tree which represents long lasting life and the father’s son who died. The father explains that he will continue having children, even though the first one died: “unborn brothers dead”. After the whole family has died, the sequoia tree will still be standing in the middle of the apple trees, representing life, and not knowing that underneath it, is death. “I want you to stand among strangers, all young and ephemeral to you, Silently keeping the secret of your birth.”This last verses of the poem, request to the tree, that he has to always be there remember all the things that happened.
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Thursday, November 12, 2009
Haiku
A young olive tree
Shares thoughts and dreams
Picking viola
Dropping them on the cold tomb
Until they vanish
Blinding sunlight
First glimpse of color
Smiles on our faces
Monday, November 2, 2009
Poem
Suicide in the Trenches by Siegfried Sassoon
I noticed it was lyric. It was about death, so I am guessing it is an elegy. The first stanza of the poem is about the positive aspects of soldiers. Then it moves to the negative sides and ends with the 'fake' glory of the people, when the soldiers come back.
I knew a simple soldier boy
Who grinned at life in empty joy,
Slept soundly through the lonesome dark,
And whistled early with the lark.
In winter trenches, cowed and glum,
With crumps and lice and lack of rum,
He put a bullet through his brain.
No one spoke of him again.
You smug-faced crowds with kindling eye
Who cheer when soldier lads march by,
Sneak home and pray you'll never know
The hell where youth and laughter go.
Thursday, September 24, 2009
Page 166
- Before this scene, McMurphy talks with the other patients about the nurse, and how the patients are all "kissing her ass".
- Says that the Nurse has no control over him
- In this scene, McMurphy finds out that most patients are voluntary except him and some of the chronics and Scanlon.
- After this scene, McMurphy finds out that one has to be nicer to the Nurse, because she has the control over him and when he lives.
Themes:
- Self-sacrifice vs. Self-interest
○ " you have more to lose than I do…I'm voluntary. I'm not committed"
- Perspective vs. perspective
○ "you, Billy -must be committed for Christsakes!"
○ "McMurphy doesn’t say a word. He's got that same puzzled look on his face like there's something isn't right, something he cant put his finger on"
- Control and Oppression
○ Control: the nurse has the control over McMurphy and when he has the right to leave the ward
Character:
- McMurphy
○ Change: finds out that he is one of the few that have been committed, and can’t chose when to leave the ward
- Harding
○ Is using this opportunity to be the bigger one
§ Motif: big vs. small
□ "No. You've got more to lose than I do, my friend"
® Condescending
- Billy Bibbit
○ Not committed either, being "big"
§ "standing on tiptoe"
Motifs:
- Big vs. small
○ The individual characters
○ The machinery:
§ " Martini comes away from the X-ray screen, buttoning his shirt and muttering, I wouldn’t of believed it if I hadn't saw it"
What drives the text?
- Language:
○ "like there's something isn't right…"
§ Unsophisticated language of McMurphy
§ The grammar is incorrect, there is a word missing
○ Tone of Harding:
§ Sophisticated
§ Condescending
§ Teasing
○ Tone of McMurphy
§ Unsophisticated
§ Harsh
§ Scared/confused
- Structure
○ The paragraphs are made when there is a change of character speaking, or if someone is in action
○ When the tone changes from Harding to McMurphy
- Imagery
○ "McMurphy walks up and down in front of that bench, running his hand around in that thick hair"
- Rhetoric
○ Repetition:
§ " You've got more to lose than I do"
§ "Are you bullshitting me?"
Saturday, September 12, 2009
Angel of Mercy (page 55)
Self sacrifice vs. Self Interest, because Miss Ratched (The Big Nurse) helps other people on her weekends, she never has a time where she doesn’t help someone. That means she sacrifices her time for other people, however, she does it partly for self interest, because this way she knows that these people will never forget her.
Motif:
The motif represented is the Nurse and her Power. On page 55, Harding described the nurse and what she does when she is not at the ward; she does volunteer work. The nurse has the power to make other people think that she is a angel, and does everything for other people, however she knows exactly that these people will never forget her.
Symbol:
There is no symbol represented in this part.
Language:
Mood: Tense; everyone is listening to Harding, without saying a word. The patients all wait until Harding is finished and then McMurphy is again the first one who says something.
Tone; Descriptive, because Harding is explaining the situation with the nurse.
Furthermore, there is some listing:
"throwing kisses, smiling ethereally"
Also there are a lot of metaphors and similes describing the nurse:
"unselfish as the wind"
"a sound comes out of his mouth like a nail being crowbarred out of a plank of green pine"
Diction:
Some of the words are quit complicated
Harding talks to people as grownups, does not put them down.
Important Quotes:
"Miss Ratched is a veritable angel of mercy and why just everyone knows it…and the couple is forever indebted to her benevolence…Oh the bitch, the bitch, the bitch, he whispers through his teeth."
"she is so intoxicated with the sweet milk of human kindness" ---relationship with Shakespeare Macbeth ?????
Monday, August 10, 2009
Post #4 Part II
Another change that happened was that Chief Bromden now is able to see the patients clear again, since the fog machine is turned off. This relates to my post I did last time, where I said that the fog machine was a hallucination and not a realistic way of torture. Furthermore, during a night in the institution, Chief Bromden wakes up and sees for the first time out of the window: “I looked out the window and saw for the first time how the hospital was out in the country.” (141) During that same night, it is the first time the author, Ken Kensey uses a reference to birds: “Then they crossed the moon- a black, weaving necklace, drawn into a V by that lead goose.” (143)
Another change, which happens, is with McMurphy and him not standing up anymore for the other patients. For example, at some point Cheswick wants something so bad that he becomes a danger for the ward so he is send to the Disturbed for the day, however McMurphy does not help him out of this situation. During a trip to the pool with the Ward, an accident happens and Cheswick drowns. From this day on, McMurphy changes and tries to become more behaved towards the Big Nurse. This proves that during the meeting at the beginning, the Big Nurse was right to keep him in the same ward until his ice would break.
At the end of Part II, McMurphy apologizes for the first time to the Big Nurse about not behaving. This is the biggest change that McMurphy has gone through, and due to this the other patients will have to change too. I hope that in Part III, there will be more change within the patients and that we find out more information about the past.
Friday, August 7, 2009
Post #3 pages 80-Part II
Language:
I have noticed that at some parts, the paragraphs are short, and tell different stories from the past and the present. I almost have the feeling that it has something to do schizophrenia, of the main character Chief Bromden. Maybe this also has something to do with the war experiences, he had. This is also one of the reasons why Chief Broom is in the institution. However, the word choice has not changed a great deal; maybe it will change more in Part II.
Questions:
I do not understand the things with the fog. Is it a hallucination that Chief Broom has from his war experiences or is it reality? Personally, I think that it is something he feels, and sees but actually it is not there. A reason for this might be that it is his fantasy world where he is trapped in, due to his prior experiences. So far we haven’t found out much about the past of the patients, and I think this will be a crucial point to find out more about Chief Bromden.
Thursday, August 6, 2009
Post #2 pages 40-80
PS: I really did not understand pages 57-80, when there is a lot of talking about rabbits.
Tuesday, August 4, 2009
Post #1 Pages 1-40
The first 40 pages of the novel One Flew Over the Cuckoo’s Nest, describes the different characters that are in the novel and sets the setting for the continuation of the story. The story is set at a mental institution, in the late sixties. So far, the novel has explained the situation at the mental institution where the main character is being treated. The main character, Chief Bromden, A.K.A Chief Buh-Broom, has been in the mental institution since World War II. He is described as a half-Indian with black hair, which can’t call for help and is being bullied by the “black boys”. The “black boys” are the helpers in the institution, who take advantage of the patients in every sort of way, even if it means to torture them. For example the nickname of Mr. Bromden, came about because he always has to sweep the floors since the “black boys” tell him to do so. The language which the main character uses is full of metaphors and similes. An example of this is on page 5, where Chief Bromden describes the reaction of the Big Nurse towards the “black boys”: “...so big I can smell the machinery inside the way you smell a motor pulling too big a load.” One of the main changes that happen in these 40 pages is the arrival of a new patient. He is described and drawn as big, tall, wide shoulders and strong man who seems to have to real mental problems, since he has no problem with cooperating with the other patients. The day the new patient arrives, named McMurphy, everyone is shocked about the reaction McMurphy has towards the other patients. He goes to all of the patients: the wheelers (the ones in a wheelchair), the vegetables (the ones that can’t do anything), the Acutes (not that severe problems) and the Chronics (the ones that have severe individual problems).
My personal response to the first 40 pages is quit opposite. On one hand, I have the feelings of the patients that are being treated like dirt and have the severe mental problems. Meaning that I have a feeling of pity towards the patients. But on the other hand, I am excited for the next part of the story, where the new patient will change things in the institutions. Also, I am excited for the relationship that the main character, Mr. Bromden and the McMurphy will have.
Sunday, May 24, 2009
Editorial
It is hard to believe that when you go to Tiffany’s and buy a wedding ring, that you are indirectly purchasing rifles and other mass destructive weapons for the RUF. The daily routine of the RUF is to mass rape, torture, randomly execute, loot and indulge in cannibalism. One of the most ‘famous’ torture methods is to chop off the arms or hands of innocent civilians. This strategy evolved in 1996 when the president of Sierra Leone said that one should ‘join hands’ for peace. That is when the RUF said that the people don’t need to hold hands to create peace, because they will not have hands to create peace. It is estimated that Sierra Leone sells diamonds worth up to 6 billion dollars per year. 80% of these diamonds are sold in the luxury market in the USA.
If Sierra Leone receives 6 billion dollars a year, then where does the money go? This question is one of the key questions when trying to solve the Sierra Leone problem. Sierra Leone should be the Saudi Arabia of Africa, but it’s not. Even though the rebel groups only sell 4-5% of the global output, there is an estimated 3.7 million deaths as a result. The world is taking action, for example the UN spent 612 million dollars only in 2001 to settle in peace. However, the conflict is not loosening up.
The world must take action, and this is only possible by not blending Africa out of the media. In between the sports and the weather, there might be those 3 minutes a month where the country Sierra Leone is mentioned, but mostly due to natural disasters. No one really knows the path of the diamonds and how many innocent children, men and women had to be killed just for the bling-bling. The stone which symbolizes wealth, power, love and honor has to be taken serious. Not in relation to the money, but in the relation to the many people killed. Take action, research your diamond and where it came from! Don’t sit around and look at your reflection, look at the diamond and see if blood has dropped on it.
Tuesday, May 19, 2009
Editorial
Explains the setting
Explains what you can see from the automobile
The language is simple
One needs pre-knowledge to understand the article
Points:
America should send over more troops
Now that the war has been going on, the soldiers have become smarter
The soldiers are ready to fight
Afghanistan is under Western aid
Counterpoint:
Citizens of the USA want their husbands, sons, boyfriends, etc. to come back from the war
Conclusion:
"more boots on the ground"
We are smarter now, so we should use this opportunity and expand the troops
Sunday, May 17, 2009
Tabloid vs. Broadsheet
Tabloid:
Bluewin Closes Chat - Children Harassed
The Bluewin chatroom which was lead by swisscom mobile, decided to shut down. The negative use of the chatrooom has caused pedophiles to have easy access to personal and private information. The decision was made, due to a shocking test: Sabine Müller, pretended to be 13 year old girl. After only 47 seconds the first sex-bid was made. The result: he was 20 years older. After this, the swisscom chatroom decided it was better to close down. The act which was done by swisscom should be a role model for many other chatrooms, such as Facebook. Also the famous facebook chatroom proves to have cases where children have been invited to a meeting, and then brutally harassed. These examples should have world-wide consequences; however nothing has been done yet.
Broadsheet:
Online Chatroom Takes Archetype Decision
The Bluewin chatroom, which was lead by the Swiss telecommunication company, Swisscom decided to close their chatroom. The frequent use of the chatroom has also caused pedophiles and murders to have various access to personal information. Felix Graf, the manager of the chatroom stated that: “We do not longer want to be associated with sexaul activities on our chatroom”. For this exact reason the chatroom was closed for the good of the children. Furthermore, the Zürich Kantons Polizei (Zurich Police) did an online test to see whether there would be any sexual harassment. They pretended to be a 13 year old girl, an there was an appalling result, after only 47 seconds the alleged 13 year old girl was offered sexual activity. The man who offered sexual activity was 33 years old. Not only the Bluewin chatroom shows sexual activity but also the famous chatroom Facebook. The consequences of these chatrooms should be seen as a world-wide problem. For more information on how to protect your children turn to page 23.
Wednesday, May 13, 2009
Headlines
NEW RECORD: COW JUMPS 6 METERS
Text 1
Hey diddle diddle, the cat and the fiddle
The cow jumped over the moon
The little dog laughed to see such sport
And the dish ran away with the spoon
Beggar Steals Last Supper
Pig Thief Caught
Text 2
Tom-tom the piper’s son
Stole a pig and away did run
The pig was eat
Tom was beat
Tom went roaring down the street
Brown Barges To Sea (As in Gordon Brown)
Ship Rescue Fails
Text 3
There was a young man of high rank
Who went to sea in a tank
They said, “It is sad,
He surely is mad!”
And he proved they were right when he sank
Poem Contest: Japan Juggles with Jury
Poem Makes It Impossible To Breath
Text 4
There was a young man from Japan
Whose poetry never would scan
When they asked him why
He said with a sigh,
“It’s because I put as many words in the last line as a possibly can.”
Newspaper parts
By-line: Choe Sang-Hun
Cut: In the middle, Barack Obama
Head: Obama lays out a post-crisis landscape
Nameplate: International Herald Tribune
Lead: around the world,
Sony and General Motors
South Korea
Jump line: South Korea, page 20
Index: Mini Index, at the bottom
Photo Credit: Jason Reed/Reuters
Deck: --
Cutline/Caption: Protestors clash with police
Graphic: There is only a loosely connected picture at the bottom
Ears: Three on top: Roger Cohen and a climber find new purpose and china sets electric goals
Wednesday, March 25, 2009
Letter
Hi Mom,
How are you? I am depressed and not satisfied with my job what so ever. Everything is just ghastly, absolutely ghastly. I can't even talk about it, that’s how depressing my life is at the moment. My brain is the size of a F-ing planet mom and I have to bring people to a bridge, how bad can my life get? Even though I am only a prototype, I know for sure that something went wrong. How did they start with you, Mom? I heard that you had the job to make sure that the spaceships don’t bump into things, is that true? Oh, God I'm so depressed. I am not satisfied in my job and don't even know my family and I was only a prototype, so pretty much a mistake. And on top of that, I am writing a letter which probably won’t even reach you…Oh dear, so much pain. Woops, I don't even feel pain, I am just a clump of metal sorted out in different pieces and "by accident" they made my depressed. Oh, and did I mention that I worked in a car park! A car park, can you believe it mother? Do they want me to just sit around and do nothing, or do they just want me to site in a corner and rust slowly and then fall apart. They will probably take the pieces that are still okay and use them for some other robot. Mom, I really need your help. If you understand me and if my letter ever reaches you then you have to take me out of this hell hole. Please, do you understand me? What should I do Mom, stick my head in a bucket of water? I’ve got one ready. So please answer if you exist, so that you can help me sort out my feelings and try not to fall apart.
Your Depressed,
Marvin
Monday, March 16, 2009
Chapter 7
At the same time, Arthur and Ford are on Earth trying to escape back to the galaxy. Finally, they see a spaceship and they start celebrating their rescue but then the spaceship vanishes. The two them decide that they have to figure a way out of this and look up the word "towel" in The Guide to the Galaxy Book. (I am not sure what the end result is with the word "towel")
Then the chapter jumps back to the spaceship and Zaphod, who believes that he got a message the night before telling him to meet up with Zarniwoop so that he can learn something to his disadvantage. (We also find out how Zaphod escapes the Haggunenon). When the spaceship finally lands on Ursa Minor Beta, Zaphod is directed to the office of Zarniwoop where he also meets Marvin. When Marvin and Zaphod are in the lift going to the office, the planet suddenly gets bombarded. After that shock, Zaphod is "attacked" by a Frogstar Robot, but Marvin saves the situation at last. The scene ends with the whole planet being taken away to Frogstar.
Motifs
Motifs
The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy is a radio play which uses the ideas of comedy and science fiction to make it appealing to listeners. Science fiction is a genre which uses futuristic aspects, the unlikelihood and unrealistic creatures to make the book, movie or radio play more interesting for the audience. Some examples of ideas which keep reoccurring are the destruction of the earth, time travel, advanced technology and sarcasm. These five motifs are very significant and keep the radio play going, and make The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy a fun and interesting piece of work.
The destruction of the earth is an important motif in the radio play because it is the reason why Author Dent and Ford Prefect are on a flying saucer traveling to a different galaxy. The destruction of the earth is something which is an unlikelihood for an everyday person; however Douglas Adams, the author of The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy, uses this to make the radio play more comedic. The reason why we laugh when the earth explodes is because it ridiculous and absurd. To some extent we even believe that it is impossible for the world to end, let alone being saved by a flying saucer. This motif keeps reoccurring when the protagonists discuss the results of the earth’s explosion and how things can be solved. For example, when one of the aliens talks about how the blueprints for the earth are ready and that the world will have to change, “I’ve got a thousand glaciers poised and ready to roll over Africa” (83) this makes the reader chuckle because it is very unlikely that we will have glaciers in Africa.
Another example of a motif is time travel. Time travel is mostly humorous because it uses a familiar situation and takes it back into a past era or the situation is set in the unknown future. An example of time travel is when Ford, Arthur, Trillian and Zaphod are thrown through time after an explosion in the galaxy. All of them land in a restaurant and are greeted by the waiter. This is the familiar situation which is placed into the galaxy a million years ahead. This makes the situation funny because the characters do not know that there has been time travel and their confusion makes the motif very funny.
Furthermore, the advanced technology in the radio play is very ridiculous and that is why we laugh about situations like a talking computer which knows the answer to life. One of the main examples which always comes back is Marvin. Marvin is a depressed talking robot. Douglas Adams used personification to make the robot appear depressed, which makes the audience laugh about it. We think that it is very unusual for a robot to talk and that is why we laugh. Also Marvin is depressed which makes his voice very monotonous. However, we only know the voice due to the sound effects in the radio play. Probably, the characteristics of Marvin would not be as funny if the radio play was a novel.
The language throughout the book is at times very sarcastic. Sarcasm is mostly humorous because it consists of a taunting remark which can be ironic and hurt or make fun of someone or something. Sarcasm is used often when the characters speak because the fact that the world exploded and that there are aliens with humans in a space ship is ironic. That is why Douglas Adams uses a lot of sarcasm to make his characters talk in a realistic way and it always fits to the situation.
All in all the motifs in the radio play are mostly linked to the science fiction genre and it uses language which makes everything seem funnier. The reason why Douglas Adams used motifs which appear in the science fiction novel is because he probably wants to make science fiction seem more humorous. He also chooses the voices and the characters of each person or alien very specific so that each character is extraordinary and that the audience has something to laugh about.